The client sent me 4 versions. He prefers #4, as long as it isn’t too long for your purposes:
Version 1: GBW Insurance is a regional insurance agency working to protect people through risk management and insurance.
2. GBW Insurance is a regional insurance agency working to protect people through risk management and insurance. We work to understand your needs and then to find you the right protection.
3. GBW Insurance is a regional insurance agency working to protect people through risk management and insurance. We work to understand your needs and then to find you the right protection. You work hard to succeed, we work hard to protect you.
4. . GBW Insurance is a regional insurance agency working to protect people through risk management and insurance. We work to understand your needs and then to find you the right protection. You can focus on your life and work, with less worry about what can go wrong. You work hard to succeed, we work hard to protect you.
Id prefer 4 but let me know if thats not short enough.
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